It’s three thirty and
already light is misting
bronzed grasses glisten
nothing dries these autumn days
moisture sparkles in my eyes.
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Beautiful tanka Janice and I can see a 3/5/3 haiku embedded there
misting light
bronzed grasses glisten
like my eyes
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I looked a bit closer..as on my interface I can’t see post and comment at the same time. This is your haiku and I like it very much!
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I can picture this autumn scene. “bronzed grasses glisten”
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Wow Denis! I like this version..it captures both image and feeling. Thank you :))
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You wrote it Janice, I just cut and pasted a shorter version.
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A few words changed position…. 🙂
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I find it interesting that bronzed grasses in summer ‘distress’ me but now the lighting and deepening of colours make them beautiful.
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Magnificent!
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Thank you 🙂
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