Sleepwalking—Cinquain poems

Marc Chagall. Sleep-Walker (LE SOMNAMBULE). 1911

Marc Chagall. Sleepwalker (LE SOMNAMBULE). 1911 courtesy of www.marcchagallart.net

A few cinquain poems in  response to Jane Dougherty’s Poetry Challenge, based on this intriguing painting by Marc Chagall, Russian-French painter living from 1887 to 1985:

#1

Sleepwalk,

moon’s hypnosis

lures lovers longing to

conquer life’s eternal maelstrom

with love.

#2

You wave,

cry out my name,

urging me to come yet

I hesitate, my love frozen

by fear.

#3

Under

bright summer moon

love beckons in a dream.

At the edge of passion’s flow, I

waver.

#4

Falling

towards passion

under golden moon glow.

Serpents rise as I accept your

embrace.

#5

Rising

from death’s slumber,

she whispers at midnight

over shimmering cool waters,

long lost.

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12 thoughts on “Sleepwalking—Cinquain poems

    1. Thank you. At first glance the painting seemed simple but the more I looked the more I saw and wondered about. His style is intriguing. I’d love to see the original painting.

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  1. “Conquer life’s eternal maelstrom with love.” “Love frozen by fear.” “At the edge of passion’s flow.” “Falling towards passion.” — I absolutely adore these lines. Your cinquains are so beautiful and the different themes in all five poems shows how varied the interpretations of the painting can be. A child’s dream? A nightmare? Reality? You never know.

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