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drifting by
soaring gulls
flash the whitecaps
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∞
sky magic
gulls
capturing sunlight
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Haiku inspired by gulls showing off by Lake Ontario and Ronovan Writes Haiku Challenge #97. The prompt words are Magic (enchanted) and Glimmer (sparkles, flashing).
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I live your haiku Janice. Nice interpretation if prompts and lucky seagulls getting a look in with their own poem. They’re so ‘common’ it’s easy to be blind to their beauty. I was actually watching 2 soar through the crowds in a covered railway terminal this afternoon. Among the dark suited, serious commuters, they stood out for their freedom and playfulness.
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I read your corrective note before your main one … at first I thought you were making a mysterious comment over my head :)–then I got it–correction features drive me nuts too (though handy at times)…anyway — seagulls are common -yet as you say they do have their beauty–the scene I saw the other day was perfect for attempting photos as they were skimming through drafts near the shore on a very windy day.
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Great imagery with the words.
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Thank you 🙂
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My pleasure
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*love not live, and of not if. Argh predictive text!
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I like to watch they sea gulls, especially when they play in the wind. Nice post.
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Thanks Laura–if it hadn’t been so chilly and I didn’t have a cold I would have stayed to watch them much longer!
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Your haiku are beautiful descriptions of your pictures. Lovely combination. 🙂
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Thanks Vashti 🙂
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You caught the gulls in action to match the wonderful haiku. I love the way you brought the gulls into each haiku to strengthen the challenge Janice
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Thanks Denis… I took the photos about a week ago and was looking for a posting opportunity. I was thrilled that they were flying relatively low so close to shore.
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enjoy all your Haikus, this one is great too! loved the last picture 🙂
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Thank you 🙂
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