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Wrapped in a dream world hypnotized Unaware of reality, Basic sustenance sanitized. Wrapped in a dream world hypnotized Countless creatures traumatized, Labour toils in anonymity Wrapped in a dream world hypnotized Unaware of reality.
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Response to Jane Dougherty Poetry Challenge #16: Triolet. For information about the form, please follow the link to Jane Dougherty’s challenge post. The artwork, “Dream, dream….,” created by Belarusian artist, Marta Shmatava, in 2010, was kindly offered by Jane as part of the challenge prompt. As you may note, my poem doesn’t interpret the art but uses it as a source of inspiration.
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Great interpretation Janice 🙂
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Thank you 🙂
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Many live in a dreamlike state.
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It’s hard not to. The way western society is set up with distant hidden production of food, clothing, and consumer goods, we have little understanding of the stories behind our ‘comfort’.
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So true!
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I love the way you wove a moral into the poem.
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Very well done.
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Thank you 🙂
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