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Here is my contribution to this Haiku Challenge: two poems with identical opening lines, but different messages, inspired by prompts: ‘Rise and Save’. For those who wish to join in or read other entries, I have provided a link at the end of this post.
Wisdom’s Gems
Sages rise with sun
Upon sleeping through moon time
They save wisdom’s gems.
Sages rise with sun, upon sleeping through moon time. Upon sleeping through moon time, they save wisdom’s gems.
Conserving Daylight
Sages rise with sun
After sleeping in darkness
They save light for day.
Sages rise with sun after sleeping in darkness. After sleeping in darkness, they save light for day.
Many writers submit poems to RonovanWrites Haiku Challenge— a wide variety of thoughts and emotions are expressed. To give it a try or to have a good read, visit the prompt post. Links to other haikus using the prompts are in the comments.
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I loved the Conserving Daylight Haiku best
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Thanks for letting me know🍁😊
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Nice ones! First one’s too good.. i liked it more.. 🙂
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Thanks! Now I have a vote for one and a vote for the other–it’s interesting to hear what people lean to 😊
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🙂
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Hello Janice! I love both haiku. Unique use of the prompts. Well done. 🙂
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Thank you!😊
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